Sunday, April 19, 2015

Poetry Project


                         TWO VOICE POEM ON SELMA MARCH

There’s no more segregation
in this state, so please let us
March                                                                                               

                                                                                                            Go home negros

                                                Why wont they just
leave


We would like to
March


Your safety is at risk, leave!

                                                Get out of our way!

We want to march!
and we want our
freedom!

                                                Why are you destroying
                                                What we believe in?

This is your last warning

   

Ask me my name

That light is
awfully bright
Are you disturbed
by me? I feel that
you’re afraid

Do I have
any friends?
I want to see my
face Who am
I?

I scare you
What do I do?
Life is black and
white I hide in
the shadow of
my hoodie

Do I like myself?
I don’t know
me I am ashamed
I bow my head
As me my name

She brings out my emotions sad or pleased
The green grass changes me to a player
I love it all when I play I’m released
It’s like shedding a hard outer layer
She plays with my emotions everyday
This sport gives me joy and a team to love
She has produced chants like ole ole!
I would be forever thanking above
I always hope my team can win a game
I always wish they could win a title
I will never forget the day I came
She makes me work hard all the time
This is what I want to do in my life
If I can do this there will be no strife
   


            The poem “America” by Claude Mckay is about a man who loves something that

gives him stress. Claude Mckay describes America with harsh words in the first half of

the poem. Then he’ll go on to write how much he embodies it. In the end it’s a complex

confusing poem that provokes thinking.. America has different main ideas, word

choices, and literary devices.


            As mentioned above this poem can be seen from different points of view. The

poet Claude Mckay describes America as a country he loves but at the same time it’s a

love hate relationship. He mentions some negatives and positives of America. It seems

like America is the only place he’s able to call home.   


            Claude Mckay has a unique arsenal of word choice throughout his poem. He uses

deep words like “Although she feeds me bread of bitterness and sinks into my throat her

tiger’s tooth.” The poet uses such harsh words to describe how much pain America

causes him. The poet goes on to write how America gives him strength and how he loves

it.


            This entire poem is filled with many literary devices. Throughout the poem

Claude Mckay expresses his feelings metaphorically, for “stealing my breath of life, I

will confess I love this cultured hell that tests my youth!” America is a nation not a

cultured hell, but the poet wants to explain his bittersweet feeling. He also uses similes

like “her vigor flows like tides into my blood”. Claude uses this simile to show how

America can give him strength.

     

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